This city is built of man, paved in the histories of the men who built its systems - from its dirt roads to its sewers, each cobblestone an unmarked grave. Men who lay cables, concrete, foundations. Men who sold pants and sandwiches to the men who lay the skeleton of the city; men who built storefronts for pants and sandwich shops, but eyed something higher. What is a city if not the strata of these stories stacked in layers, brick by cellular brick to build pyramids, then empires – corporate skyscrapers of Babel that shine like the Golden Calf when they catch the sun.
© 2021 Jewish Young Professional

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Written for The Sunday Muse
I liked the focus on the anonymous, ignored workers here.
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Thanks! Yeah, there are a lot of people we forget
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The price of man’s determination and greed to build bigger, taller, and more, more, more has been tragically brought home by the dreadful fall of the structure in Surfside, Florida, where warnings were ignored, and many lost their lives.
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I hadn’t thought of that connection initially, but it is a good point. Eventually, our own greed becomes unsustainable and tragedy occurs. Very sad.
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You have built a magnificent poem here, layered in the triumphs and soils of man. All the many things that make up daily life, and also the big things that bring us truly down. I really love this poem my friend!
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Thank you – yes, I do feel like it captures something about human nature. Thank you for the prompt as inspiration! I think this was one of my favorites!
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Very cool imagery
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Thanks!
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Oh how we babel-on and on, enamored by our golden calves as we think ourselves gods, trying to reach the heavens with ever taller buildings. Excellent poem full of the wonders and dismays of our human ways.
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As I was writing this one, I was reminded of a Rabbinic story told about the Tower of Babel, that the builders didn’t notice if a man died, but wept if a brick fell. That loss of humanity is just insane
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I thought you might have that story in mind. Isn’t it amazing how things never really change?
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True and kinda sad
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Very sad actually. As I listen to lectures on history and theology I just end up shaking my head at what was and what still is.
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Amazing. This poem is a building. It’s a stack of images, kind of like bricks. It’s a stack of man-ness – our structures as fallible as ourselves. It feels mournful and brave and kind of magical and beatified as well. A really stunning piece.
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Wow, thank you! I just hope my poem won’t lead to the same societal demise as the Tower of Babel or other ill-fated architectural structures!
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It’s sad in a certain way. All of this work put into building monuments to attest to the universe that we’re here, yet the tallest buildings can be toppled in a couple hours..
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A good point about our achievements based on shaky foundation. Or in general
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a magnificent ode to the modern pyramids that make our cities and to those who built them —
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Yes, modern pyramids is a good description, I think. Thanks!
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the intersection of poetry and anthropology
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Thanks! I love when a short poem touches on something about the nature of humanity
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This is glorious poetry!
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Thank you!
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Pretty neat.
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Thanks!
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Most welcome!
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Greed to have more while trampling those with less is a pandemic of its own. Great writing!
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It really is, sadly. Thanks!
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Sorry, JYP, I got your comment on my dVerse post but when I went to reply I must have hit something weird and your comment disappeared. 😦 No idea what happened. Anyway, thanks for the lovely comment. I found some very suitable glasses in an op shop today. They’re just what I wanted. 😀
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Oh WordPress… I’m thrilled to hear that you got the right glasses!!!
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🙂
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This is such a powerful poem! Emphatic in the troubling times we live in this sprawling concrete jungles we call our homes.
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Thank you! Yes, it is interesting how and why we choose to build such massive structures.
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Thanks for following!
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I love that image of the man-city! Great poem too
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I can’t take credit for the image. I got it from The Sunday Muse. It was great inspiration for me though!
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I bet, that thing is very cool 👊🏼
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