People tend to find God in the mountains
or the desert, somewhere unsheltered
by the infrastructure of the city –
Search for God in a city, you come back
with shopping bags and pizza;
search for God in the wilderness, you find God
because there is nothing else to find –
You carry God back in your camping lantern,
but, like a jar of fireflies, the spark
typically dies on the drive home.
You pack that dusty jar of exoskeletons
in the garage, the attic, perhaps the basement
somewhere alongside other boxed relics
unearthed only for special occasions.
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Written for The Sunday Muse #184 and Twiglets #251
I really like this.
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Thank you! And thank you for the Twiglets inspiration!
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You nailed it, JYP. How often we go out to find God and bring home gods instead? As a side note, when I’m in the wilderness I am so distracted be all the critters, plants, geology, grandeur, and minutia, God is a part of it and all of it.
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Exactly! Being out in the wilderness makes it easier to appreciate all the natural beauty of the world
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Beautiful, JYP.
❤
David
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thanks!
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What an awesome poem! It reflects something everyone goes through, how fragile our attention is. Our deepest desires are so easily overshadowed by the noise of the world. Love the “shopping bags and pizza” image.
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Cities tend to be very distracting like that.
Thanks!
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I really like this!
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Thanks! I realize I’m biased, but I happened to like this one quite a bit myself. (I’ve definitely written other poems I’m not as into)
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There is much truth to your lovely poem! Glad to see you at the Muse this week!
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Thanks! Yeah, it’s great to be back. Thanks for the prompt inspiration
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Reminds me of the quotes ‘… in all your ways know Him”.(Proverbs 3.6)
There’s also ‘…Let all your deeds be for the sake of heaven. (Avot 2:12)
I don’t have to seclude myself in the mountains to find Him. I can also find Him while eating that slice of pizza, at the shopping mall, or in my garage.
🙂
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Amazing! Honestly, I think ideally, one should find G-d while eating pizza or in one’s house. Food and shelter being some of the many blessings we receive. It’s just that in the day-to-day, we tend to be too distracted to really notice.
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Wonderful poem and right on point. The difference between God and Goods is os, which is bone-in Latin. (Not sure where this is going.) But the two words share many letters and the order in which they appear.
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I’m not sure where you’re going with the os / bone-in connection either, but I have learned something new and I appreciate it.
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Before I looked it up, I thought that Os might mean mouth, so out of the mouth, but bone….???
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I guess it makes sense, osteoporosis and what not.
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The closest I’ve felt to anything spiritual was during music/singing at our temple. I’m usually uncomfortable outside, so I tend to focus on being too hot or too cold or my aching back…
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I also feel spirituality through music and singing. I’ve sung in a Jewish choir and in Jewish a cappella groups before, and there were a couple pieces we did that I really felt a spiritual lift just singing/listening to them because they were so beautiful. It was awesome.
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Beautifully expressed, sadly common truth.
pax,
dora
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Both finding G-d and keeping G-d around are challenges. Glad you enjoyed.
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The truth of how shallow our beliefs can be for us to be so easily distracted from them. A very thought-provoking write.
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I think you are right that there is a certain shallowness, but I also think that sustaining belief when the brightest moments of inspiration have faded is a legitimate challenge.
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Boxed in the attic or on display (but not used) in the curio cupboard.
When politics take over and there is no peace.
That’s when folks leave the ‘flock’…
And keep only their hearts open to ‘sparks’.
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“Boxed in the attic or on display (but not used) in the curio cupboard.” – this is such a good way of putting it
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See, the key is, bring him home inside of you.
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Yep, internalizing and keeping the spark alive. Arguably harder than finding G-d in the first place
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Wow, this is profound!
God can be found anywhere if sought. Be we do not go seeking.
So so loved how wonderfully you expressed it!
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Thank you so much! I think we don’t go seeking, and also, even when we do seek and find, we don’t do much with that belief/inspiration/spirituality afterwards.
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I can relate.
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I’m happy to hear that. You are a non-theist, if I recall (please correct me if I have misremembered)? Writing a poem with such blatant reference to G-d always risks being polarizing, but I think there is something universal about seeking inspiration and maintaining that inspired/spiritual state at home. I’m happy to hear that this was relatable.
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I’m non-theistic with a dash of Zen thrown in for variety. 🙂
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Variety is the spice of life🙂
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A.W. Tozer once said “To have found God and yet still pursue Him is the soul’s paradox of love”. He is Spirit, yes, but He’s also very real and very alive. Psalms 63:8 in the Passion Translation reads “With passion I pursue and cling to you. Because I feel your grip on my life, I keep my soul close to your heart.” Another favorite of mine from that version is Psalms 25:14, which reads “There’s a private place reserved for the devoted lovers of Yahweh, where they sit near him and receive the revelation-secrets of his promises.” 🥰
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I suppose the purpose of the pursuit is to maintain that feeling of closeness. I feel as though there is a challenge in finding G-d, and then in maintain belief outside of the initial inspiration/spiritual setting
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You probably know from reading my blogs that I believe Jesus is the Messiah, and that all Old Testament prophecies surrounding the Messiah spoke of His first coming as the Lamb of God who was sacrificed once and for all for our sins, rose from the dead and is now seated at the right hand of the Father; and His second coming as the Lion of Judah who has inherited the nations and will reign forevermore. The New Testament teaches that the Holy Spirit indwells believers, and is with us always. He is our comforter, teacher, counselor, guide, prayer warrior, and friend. He never leaves us or forsakes is. This is something I can personally testify of, for my relationship with Him is as real as my relationship with anyone else. So for me, inspiration setting or not, I am always aware of His presence ❤️
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That is pretty amazing that you always feel awareness of divine presence / Holy Spirit!
I think that arguably, one should always be aware of G-d, regardless of location. I think that having an awareness of divine presence at all times regardless of setting and activity is a great spiritual goal to strive for.
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A common thing but rarely observed so succinctly or so well.
To Do List: 1) find God 2)Dedicate my life to, hey look, a squirrel!
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HAHA!! Best comment ever!!
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By the way, your “Remember the Maine” is amazing! Fantastic imagery. Love it so much! (I can’t figure out how to comment on your site without using my gmail)
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The lines about returning with pizza and shopping bags hit home.
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That is the thing about cities. G-d might live in the city, but there are so many shopping destinations and just so much pizza.
Thanks for sharing
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Makes me think of all the camp fire conversions of church camp. Most of us are searching for an experience but ‘feelings’ are so fleeting. I’ve discarded many “beliefs” but am trying to understand the source of it all. Maybe faith is just believing that God is?
Though provoking poem. I like it.
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Campfire conversations at church camp are a great way to find that spark of inspiration. But yeah, that spiritual experience is fleeting and the real test of faith is maintaining after that spark has worn off. Thank you!
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God, or that blissful feeling of oneness, can be found easily and prosaically in the everyday:; as Buddha says: ‘Be where you are; otherwise you will miss the moment’ –
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Exactly. It would be great if people found and appreciated that spiritual sense every day and in every setting. But it’s not the easiest task (at least not for me)
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A lovely poem ~~ the spiritual connection to nature cannot be underestimated. So glad I returned to read the last of the poetry.
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Thank you! Yes, there is something about the beautiful setting of nature that makes it easier to find a spiritual connection, in a way that is harder at home.
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In the cities, people worship wealth. Your poem is a reminder that we should have a spiritual part to our lives.
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Good point. It’s harder to worship wealth in the deep wilderness because it doesn’t help you the same way. Does a grizzly bear really care how much money you spent on your car or your clothes when it’s eying you hungrily? You almost have to seek out another entity to put your faith in.
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Dear JYP,
I have discovered your blog only today, and I feel I have been missing out on really good stuff. This, by far, is the best post I have read on WordPress. I have an innate respect for you and your writing. God is everywhere! But we only want to find him in some statue. When we accept is present everywhere, then we will reach there. The ideal utopian world.
Kudos on being such a wonderful poet!
~ Arnav
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I’m touched by your kind words. I am so glad that you liked this post. I’m just an ordinary person, trying to find and hold on to that spark of spirituality and divinity (the holding on being harder in some ways than the finding) just like everyone else. Thank you so much! Pleasure to meet you!
-JYP
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That’s so true. I haven’t even found my spark yet, probably I am too young. Perhaps sticking with people like you can help!
Indeed a pleasure to meet you too!
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I think it can be a struggle for everyone; I don’t think age hugely matters. For what it’s worth, you sound very wise. If I hadn’t read your About page on your blog, I would never have guessed that you’re only fourteen. You write with maturity and wisdom.
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