Bedrock

The sonnet you left on my Facebook wall
left my normally garrulous roommate speechless.
“He’s on the spectrum”, she sputtered finally.
A warning that I should view your syllables
like shifty-eyed suspects.  

But you and I traded haiku 
like kisses, which we also traded
awkwardly on a dorm room bed frame,
carving words into the hollows of our throats
like initials in a willow tree with our tongues.
Afterwards, we drank microwaved tea.

Of course it ended.  
It’s absurd to think a poem is a bedrock; 
everything on poetic ground teeters
and crashes. Still, some days, I wish
I’d stopped balancing practically
on the diving board and let myself fall.
Photo Credit Sarah Whiley. From MLMM Photo Challenge

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Written for dVerse, WOTDC (garrulous), WOTDC (crash), and MLMM Photo Challenge and retroactively for dVerse (kiss)

72 comments

  1. “carving words into the hollows of our throats
    like initials in a willow tree with our tongues” is evocative and a perfectly apt way to describe those who fall in love over poetry. I tried it once, when I was certainly old enough to know better. All the words became an avalanche of regret because I wrote only what was true and he was unwittingly not writing poetry at all but his fantasy novel. Turns out he wanted to be a rogue.

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    • I have to admit that the reason the romance with this poet failed was not because he wasn’t poetic enough or because poetry is not a foundation, but because I was dating someone else at the time. *facepalm* Couldn’t really incorporate that into the poem though…

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  2. In just a few lines you express you so much! I especially love the lines, “Still, some days, I wish
    I’d stopped balancing practically
    on the diving board and let myself fall”

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  3. Your poem made me smile! I love the sonnet left on the Facebook wall and the trading of haiku and kisses, and the lines:
    ‘carving words into the hollows of our throats
    like initials in a willow tree with our tongues’
    and
    ’… Still, some days, I wish
    I’d stopped balancing practically
    on the diving board and let myself fall.’
    I’ve often felt that way too.

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  4. Amid some delightfully un-poetic particulars of the emotion — haiku on Facebook walls, the roommate’s dour assessment, sipping tea that’s been microwaved — wilder contraries are a play when kissing — bedrock emotion (I assume that’s the heart deepest where it yearns and becomes) amid rocking precarious bedposts, the nature of restraint which might protect and yet so prevents what kisses could unfold. Well done.

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