It’s said that one should make oneself,
one’s home, a castle of self-sustaining comfort and joy.
But I’m not made of matches or flint
so I chase the good times down highways
following the silver trail of sparks
from somebody else’s fireworks party. Then I dance.
I dance because it feels so good to dance
I dance because my body cannot resist dancing.
I dance because I want to savor this music
like a butterscotch caramel as long as it lasts.
In the back of the taxi, the musky sweat of dancing
lingers on my skin, glittering like stardust.

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Written for The Sunday Muse, Shay’s Word Garden Word List, and Poets and Storytellers United.
Love the poem and it’s fresh imagery. Dance on!
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Thanks!
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💃👯🕺
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Nothing like dancing the night away then savoring the sweat, stardust and musky scent of a good night spent. I love the poem.
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Exactly. I feel like dance sweat is another substance entirely. Sweat from exercise or hot weather – gross. Sweat from dancing is more like fairy dust
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One reason I started wearing all black all the time is when we were dancing 4 or 5 nights a week, black didn’t show sweat. The other reason is purely political.
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Political?
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Has to do with Clinton and taxes.
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It’s been a long, long time since I last went out dancing.
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This was inspired by a recent experience that was the first time after a long period of not dancing.
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This is wonderful
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Aw thanks! So glad you enjoyed!
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Beautiful poetry and how clever you are ~~~ combining three prompts!
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Thanks! I enjoy combining the prompts.
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I love it. As a former dancer..recognise things…
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Cool! What kind of dance?
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Cos your friends don’t dance and if they don’t dance, well they’re no friends of mine. 😛
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“We can dance, we can dance, Everybody look at your hands…” – you got this stuck in my head now (not complaining!)
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“But I’m not made of matches or flint” and “In the back of the taxi, the musky sweat of dancing / lingers on my skin, glittering like stardust.” are great lines.
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That last one was my favorite too!
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How beautifully you combined the prompts!
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Thanks! I almost always combine prompts vs. writing an individual piece per prompt because I didn’t (and still don’t) want this to become a poetry blog.
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raw and relatable
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Thanks!
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‘Following the silver trail of sparks’ this is breath taking lovely. Chris
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I really liked that line too!
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🤔 I’ve never danced once in my life but you make it sound intriguing.
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Really? Not once? Everyone’s different, but I find that when there is a dance floor and the right kind of upbeat music, I can’t not dance.
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Does a middle school slow dance when the other person really didn’t want to dance with me count?
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Nah, doesn’t count. Slow dancing is just two people staring awkwardly at each other while sort of moving. Dancing to me is when the beat is so good you just feel moved to move your body to it. Try it some time! I give you permission to get mad at me if you hate it.
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🤔😐😫
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Now I feel bad and needlessly judgemental. Ok, middle school slow dance counts, but you still gotta try dancing to something fast and upbeat. If you feel stupid dancing in your room (you shouldn’t, but I get it) try a dance-like gym class.
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As one with two left feet with a history of embarrassing pratfalls, I still appreciate the celebratory effusion of dance. You give me hope to try again. 😉
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I’m not the most coordinated and graceful myself. It’s just that if there is music and a dance floor, I am easily entertained 😄 Go for it!
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Beautiful, with strong imagery and ebulient feeling.
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Thanks! It was loosely inspired by Purim this year (I went to a Purim party with a DJ and dancing – it was awesome!)
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That’s cool! We also had a fun Purim party, costumes and all, like we do every year.
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Nice! Yeah, it was great to have a proper back-to-normal-post-COVID Purim again!
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Not exactly normal, but it was much more fun to wear a cat mask than a Covid mask, and eat and dance with a crowd.
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Cat masks are so much better than COVID masks!!😸
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Yep, and if you saw my Purim post, that’s the mask I wore, real Venetian – I love it!
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I’m right there with you, JYP! I can’t resist a boogie either. Love the whole thing, it’s so relatable and it ends so well with those last two lines:
“In the back of the taxi, the musky sweat of dancing
lingers on my skin, glittering like stardust.”
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Thanks! I think dance sweat is a different substance entirely. Sweating after working out, running, physical labor, or hot weather – disgusting. But the sweat that lingers after dancing has a bit of magic to it.
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There’s a poem in there about different types of sweat, JYP. Interview sweat or presentation sweat is also awful. Monday morning meeting sweat also. First date sweat? Not sure. The sweat of something you love doing though is a whole other thing 😊
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Intriguing. Thanks for the idea!
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wonderful, inspired, and sensuous—
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Thank you!
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