Some say poetry is a puzzle buried meters deep, wallpapered over in the peacock pretention of academic reviews, hidden by a blizzard of obscurity. Really, a poem is that image - clear, transparent, perfect as glass – that sings like angels when you read it.


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Written in honor of World Poetry Day (March 21 – I’m late) for writephoto, dVerse, Shay’s Word Garden Word List, and The Sunday Muse.
This is lovely. ❤ May all poems sing like this one.
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Aww thanks! 🥰
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The bookends of how complex or simple a poem can be. Many poems are somewhere in the middle. And good poetry is in the eyes of the poet, the reader, and the minds of some pedantic literature teachers. Like your poem for how it frames how difficult or simple a poem can be to both write and understand.
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Very good points. I lean more towards the camp of well-chosen, deceptively simple imagery in poetry, vs. poetry via complex language and form. But there is definitely a range in approach for sure
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Me too. I have tried to write more complex poetry and it does not turn out well. What does surprise me is when people find meaning in a poem that I never intended or even thought of. Makes me feel a bit too impressed with myself.
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Yeah, the experience that others have with my work is something that always intrigues me. Part of why it’s so important to get feedback and revise
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True. And a great example.
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Thanks! It would have been kind of embarrassing if a poem with this title sucked, you know
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True. I can’t imagine you would write a sucky poem, title it “How to Write a Poem” and publish it.
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Probably not. I have written crappy poetry too. But I haven’t titled it “How to Write a Poem” or published it – for good reason. I once wrote a poem called “How to Write a Love Poem” – needs some revision, but it was pretty good
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You could also do “How to Love and Write a Poem.” Or “How to Love a Poem and Write It too.” Or maybe “How to Right a Wronged Poem.” The possibilities are endless.
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Excellent suggestions. Billy Collins has a piece, “Workshop” (https://poets.org/poem/workshop) that’s arguably a response to that last one; the poem is set in a writing workshop and makes you feel like you’re workshopping the poem. It’s a favorite of mine. So maybe I’d do a “how to right a romantically-wronged, betrayed poem with creative revenge fantasies” poem.
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Perfect.
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you’re so right. if it sings to you its a poem xoxo
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Or a song. Which is also a form of poetry
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One of my favorite things is a piece by Grover Lewis entitled “Found On The Dais After The President’s Declaration Of War On Poetry.” The body of the piece is just a list of 21 quiz questions for analyzing a poem, such as you might find in a high school classroom.
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I’ll have to check it out!
Tangentially related, you reminded me of the time when we were studying the Romantic poets in my French class. You’d think I would have enjoyed this unit given that I like French and poetry. But the analysis of the poetry, especially with constantly translating the unfamiliar words, was so painful.
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I love this poem and would like to post it on my IG author page with credit to you. How would I credit you? You can reply via email if you like. loribuffalo@gmail.com.
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Flattered and honored! Credit under “JYP” with a link is perfect.
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Well, I’m glad we’ve settled that question! 😀
❤
David
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I have another poem I wrote a long time ago called “How to Write a Love Poem” which gives even better advice. I aim to give useful, practical advice!
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A beautiful one. Flows so smoothly. 🙂
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Thank you! 🥰
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Couldn’t agree more, JYP! ❤️
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Thanks! Yup, I am very image driven in poetry
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You are welcome.
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“buried meters deep” is so, so clever.
I love all of the images this evokes.
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Thanks! Meters was from another prompt and I had to use it here given the multiple meanings.
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Wow! Yeah!! ❤
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Thanks!
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Thank you for showing us how the angels sing!
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🥰
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Yes! Yes! Yes! You have it exactly right! Love it.
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Thanks! Yeah, I am particularly imagery driven in poetry
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You are welcome! I am the same.
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Beautifully said!
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Thank you!
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I sometimes…rarely, actually…attempt to write a poem. No one has ever told me that my poems sing like an angel. Quite the contrary. Most ask what the devil was I thinking by trying to write a poem.
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If I were to torture this metaphor some more, I’d say, “well not every song/poem is going to touch your soul – some are just meant to be funny and amusing” or “well maybe not everyone is a good vocalist” (In my case, I’m not completely tone-deaf but I also won’t win any talent shows or auditions either.) But I also think that contrary to the way poetry/poetry analysis is typically presented, I do think that poetry is more driven by imagery vs. complex language, form, symbolism, ideas, etc. That it is the deceptively simple images that make the poem sing. There are exceptions to everything, but I think on the whole, focusing on the images does lead to better poetry
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Maybe my image muse has left me for some one who sings better than I do.
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Maybe your muse just sucks and you should dump her and find a new one who has more respect for your metaphorical vocal stylings.
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You think I have metaphorical vocal styling? That’s the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me, metaphorically speaking.
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Well I haven’t read any of your poetry or heard your vocal stylings real or metaphorical, so this is all hypothetical, metaphorically speaking. (I hope I haven’t metaphorically killed it for you now) But sure!
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“Well I haven’t read any of your poetry or heard your vocal stylings real or metaphorical….” Consider yourself fortunate!
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My readers are not so fortunate. I’ve decided to subject them to my literal vocal stylings because my metaphorical ones weren’t sufficiently torturous: https://jewishyoungprofessional.wordpress.com/2022/03/29/instead-of-ranting-about-2-years-of-covid-im-singing-about-it-with-timothy-price/
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YES … a million times over!
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Thanks!!
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It is!!
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Thank you 💕
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Sings like angels indeed! Love this JYP!
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Thank you! By the way, I edited your comment – I’m JYP, not David,so I assume that is what you meant. But I appreciate the praise and prompt inspiration
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Exactly right: it don’t mean a thing, if it ain’t got that sing…
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It makes no difference if it’s sweet or hot… now I have this stuck in my head! 🎹🎷🎺🎤🎙️
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🤣 glad to hear it!
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Beautiful image of the essence of poetry.
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Thank you 😊
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My pleasure, darling.
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Great imagery shared in your profound poetry! 💖🌻👏👏
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Thank you 😊
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This is wonderful. Great job intertwining it with #writephoto and the other prompts.
Brilliant entry. KL ❤
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Thank you 😊 So glad I found your photo prompt
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Your poem is like an epiphany.
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Thank you!
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When did you first get into writing poems?
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It depends on how “good” a poem has to be to count, but I’ve been writing poetry since high school. It was ~12 years ago when I started going to writing workshops and my poetry really improved.
How bout you? When did you start writing short stories?
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Oh that’s cool you’ve done workshops. Me, I started when I was in third grade and have always been on again/off again depending on what’s going on in life.
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Impressive! I thought of stories in third grade, and I thought about writing them down, but actually writing the stories on paper did not happen in third grade.
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It’s overrated. Parents snoop!
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Oof. Dang! And here I was thinking that my mom was encouraging me to write the stories down because she wanted to be all encouraging of budding interests. (https://jewishyoungprofessional.wordpress.com/2022/02/14/if-you-dont-post-a-bloated-reflection-on-writing-are-you-even-a-blogger/) But maybe she had an ulterior motive!!
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There’s always a good reason… and the real reason. I remember that post!
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Speaking of imagery, how about this one, by William Carlos Williams:
so much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
water
beside the white
chickens
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Amazing! I wasn’t familiar with that one, but I love this.
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beautifully written; love the images too —
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Thanks! I wrote another piece a long time ago called “How to Write a Love Poem” which was quite different. I suppose that makes sense. Love poetry is a different animal
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it certainly is: mind you, we could all do with some advice how to write a good one 🙂
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Oh definitely! So many terrible ones out there!
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A poem can’t be caged that way, even though I appreciate the sweet song of that variety ❤
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I hear you, and while I’m very much in camp image-driven when it comes to poetry, there are times when I’ll come across a more language-driven poem that is really captivating. I still generally think that poetry is driven more by imagery than language, ideas, feelings, or form, but I do try to keep an open mind. What are your preferences in poetry?
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Thanks for asking. I prefer poems that make me feel connected to the poem and the poet in some way.
Birds are built with words
from sparrows to flamingos
all shapes and sizes.
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“Birds are built with words from sparrows to flamingos” – I love this sentiment
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❤
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A splendid definition, JYP. Love the imagery too.
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Thank you! I couldn’t claim that the secret to poetry is imagery, and then fail to deliver on that in a poem called “How to Write a Poem”, you know 😉
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You are right:)
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Although sometimes I think a dark angel too. 🙂
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Ooh, good point! Sometimes a poem sings like a dark angel punk rock band. That counts too.
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🙂
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ah, i like this. academics is fine and all, but academics is just academics. to “sing” is something much more practical, i like that, very well said
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Thanks! Yeah, I’m with you. There’s a time and place for the academic analysis and the dissecting the meaning and context, etc. but at the certain point, it’s also about the experience you have with it.
How are you feeling? You were recovery from surgery right? How are you doing?
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i’m doing very well, thank you for asking. i’m walking again and doing my PT, i’m about 95 percent right now, getting my life on track again and ready to fight the good fight.
and just to clarify, nothing wrong with academic study of literature, i enjoy it just as much as anyone, but the academics is just one side of poetry. again, enjoyed your poem
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So happy to hear that you are recovering well and doing so much better!
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Lovely poem!
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Thank you ❤️
(It would be sort of bad if a poem titled “How To Write A Poem” weren’t a good poem!)
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Great work. Keep it up 👍
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Thanks!
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I guess you’ve got me inspired,
you’ve really kindled my fire,
to try this different medium,
the one that’s called a poem.
I’d really like to rhyme,
but I’ve run out of them this time,
so for my final sentence,
I guess I’ll just post whatever I want.
Wow, thanks for this, JYP. That was fun indeed!
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Thanks! Glad you’re having some fun with it!
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