In the face of tragedy or some other scandal, we are drawn, like crows, to collect the shiny, even if it’s just a flea market key chain lie plucked by a politician from the dream bin and repackaged as new policy, as the antidote to the never again cycle. We see that dangling silver key and pounce like a lion to claim it, growling at any hand that dares pry this illusion from our claws, for we have nothing else to hold on to.

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Written for Poets and Storytellers United, dVerse, Twiglets, Go Dog Go Cafe, and The Sunday Muse
Indeed. There are corvids among us.
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I think more than corvids among us is that we ourselves can be corvids. Those attractive shiny things (even if they’re totally worthless)…
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Magpies and Judas would be proud of us.
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Is that something to be proud of though? Hmmm…
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They are/were attracted to shiney or silver things. So are opposums.
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Yep.
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We are the unfortunate witnesses
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Great song!!
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Thank you
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Good one, JYP!!!!
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Thanks!
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Excellent, JYP. You bared the witnesses and hit them right on their repackaged, scandalous heads. All the lines witness perfectly to the imperfections in “peoples”.
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Thanks! Yeah we “witness”, but we see what we want to see. And some politicians among us are quite happy to exploit that.
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Well said
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Thank you
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A slap ion the face, a punch in the gut …. of realty! Great write!!
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oops “on the face”
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Thanks! I love a good guy punch of a poem
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A lot of truth is spoken in this piece. Great poem.
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Thanks! I wish it weren’t so, but…
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Very well written. Sadly, your last line says it all… Politicians are just brash and brazen sellers of illusions. “There’s a sucker born every minute!”
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Politicians are sellers of illusion – and we keep believing it!
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Every time it seems.
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‘a flea market key chain lie’ – I love this phrase! Great poem 🙂
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Thanks! I liked it too. The lie is cheap, shiny, possibly counterfeit, overpriced – the list goes on!
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And we shout after ’em with derisirious laughter as they do. It’s a sad world.
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It is a sad world, unfortunately
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Indeed… and we believe we are lions but in reality we are crows.
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I kind of think we are both the lions and the crows, in a way. I don’t think either is especially flattering in this instance
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Sad. And we take pics too. How did we get like this? Save us!
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A picture may be worth a thousand words, but those words could be lies and propaganda
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Stunning write, JYP.
“repackaged
as new policy, as the antidote to the never again cycle.”
Succinct and meaningful. Love that last line.
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Thanks! Yeah, I wish we weren’t always sold the same poison for the never again cycle, but sadly…
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Very true indeed! So glad you joined in at the Muse my friend!
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Thanks! I’ve been on a blog vacation, and it’s good to be back. Thank you for the photo inspiration!
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You are good, darling!
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Thank you!
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This is incredibly potent! You depict the harsh reality of our times with such eloquence ❤️
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It feels wrong to say “I’m glad it resonated” – I’m not glad it resonated. It is testament to our unfortunate reality. I appreciate your feedback.
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You have captured the ugliness and devious part, sadly. Good one!
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Thank you. I wish this one didn’t ring so true to life
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Well written Only an illusion to hold on Truth spoken
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Yup. But we treat it as truth and the politicians treat it as the answer. Thank you for your feedback
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Also, I can’t comment on your blog directly because I don’t want to link to my gmail, but I just read your “Zeitgeist”, and I love it. Especially that second stanza. Well said
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Powerful and stirring.
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Thank you!
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Very timely poem..
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I wish it wasn’t so spot-on…
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Astutely observed!
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Thank you! I liked this prompt about what it means to bear witness. I don’t have a flattering answer to the question, I’m afraid.
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Your words are especially relevant in light of recent current events.
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I didn’t originally have this latest school shooting (the fact that I have to say “latest school shooting” is itself crazy) in mind when I wrote it, but it certainly fits
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I like the imagery in the poem.
It reminds me of a recent election in a neighbouring country. I just cannot imagine a people voting in a populist president with no clear policy goals. We just have to see if they are right.
I really like the way you craft the poem, excellent!
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That’s the problem. People are justifiably upset and desperate, and popular charismatic politicians prey on that. I hope it works out for your neighboring country. Thank you!
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We tend to throw away the facts and believe what we want to believe.
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Exactly! Because what we want to believe is so pretty and shiny….
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yes.
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https://georgeplace2.wordpress.com/ is my main blog. I don’t know why the link takes people to my old ones.
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Too much truth in this for comfort.
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I wish it weren’t quite so spot-on…
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Great one, JYP!
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
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Sad but true 😦
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Yes, I do wish it weren’t quite so fitting
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