You can take your sense of control and stick it in the ignition, but when you find yourself in the urban jumble of city-strangling, infrastructure-crippling traffic, with – aside from honking, praying, cursing, and crying – all equally useless pursuits – no option other than waiting, watching the sun set, in gorgeous lightning colors, over the plans you thought had mattered, you’ll learn the universe never gave a damn.

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The Sunday Muse, dVerse, W3, Poets and Storytellers United, and Twiglets. Also inspired by another poem I wrote a while ago. Feel free to vote for your fave in the comments.
I have been there and done that most of my working life. You have expressed that sense of helplessness and the fact that the universe doesn’t really give a damn.
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Albuquerque traffic that bad? (I’ve never been and have no idea what your traffic situation is like) I considered putting in a geographic location like LA, somewhere famous for awful traffic. But I liked the idea of keeping this more universal. It could be any location and any plans – the universe still don’t give a damn.
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Our traffic can get really bad. My commute used to be 35 minute to drive 17 miles to work. Nine miles of it was freeway driving at 80 mph when most lanes were clear. But that 17 miles usually took 45 to 50 minutes, and often took an hour and a half to two hours. Going home was almost always worse than going in.
My new 7-mile commute takes 15 minutes because it’s slow getting out of Corrales. But when Alameda backs up, my 15-minute commute turns into an hour or longer commute inching along in traffic and cursing a lot.
When Laurie worked in Albuquerque, she kept running shoes in the car. When traffic was bad she would go running when she was stuck near a park or she would go to a Starbucks and work or study until traffic cleared.
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That sucks when you know the distance isn’t so long and yet it takes so much time due to traffic
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Oh, I love both this piece and the earlier poem, different as they are. Equal favourites! I enjoy the way you can be serious and humorous at the same time … and sneak in a touch of beautiful too.
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Thanks! Best kind of vote! I do enjoy trying to get a bit of the humorous and the profound in simultaneous – life is too short to take yourself too seriously all the time. Really appreciate this feedback, thank you
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Your poem is ~~ GREAT!
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Thanks! Glad to hear the poem didn’t go the wayward way of my plans…
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I really like it; good and punchy.
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Thanks! I love a punchy poem. And thank you for the Twiglets inspiration
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you!
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Boy, you got that right! Love the poem.
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Glad to hear it resonated. Thanks!
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So true!
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I thought about putting in a specific location like LA or something. But I liked the idea of making it more universal because this experience is so universal
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This one so resonates, JYP!
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Glad to hear!
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Well….you had me with the first stanza! Well done@
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I thought that second person would be a good, attention-grabbing way to start. Thanks! And thank you for part of the inspiration
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“the universe never gave a damn” – no, it don’t. 🙂
I like the title, two words laced with sarcasm.
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It definitely don’t. Thanks! I like the irony of this title too.
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Everyday epiphanies can enlighten us.
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Definitely
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Reblogged this on From guestwriters.
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Thank you!
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That’s why it’s best to make no plans for your life whatsoever, then no one can screw them up!
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😂 good point!!
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That’s the conclusion I’ve come to.
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In some ways, I think it’s better to accept it vs. assume that your plans and dreams will be respected.
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In all ways
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hi, JYP!
I just want to let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted by Sylvia Cognac, is now live:
Much love,
David
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Love this. I remember seeing a meme that said, “the universe doesn’t give af about you” lol and this makes me feel the same sentiment.
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It’s so true. And I think it’s easier to accept it vs. assume the universe cares and then be disappointed later.
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