We tear down old habits

dramatically, like photos of an ex.  
As if this year will actually rebirth us 
from ordinary dry sand to beautiful glass.
  
But there is no bold break. 

The waves lap about us 
like the waves always do. 
We emerge – softened, 
but otherwise the same.
Photo by Pok Rie: https://www.pexels.com/photo/aerial-photography-of-beach-3233367/

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Poets And Storytellers United, dVerse

92 comments

  1. I like it when a poem starts with its title and love the ideas of tearing down ‘old habits dramatically, like photos of an ex’. The bold break of ‘But there is no bold break’ is genius! A neat quadrille.

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  2. Gosh, I LOVE this, especially this line:
    As if this year will actually rebirth us
    from ordinary dry sand to beautiful glass.

    I am trying to make gentle, small changes this year. Slowly, slowly. Perhaps more italicized than bold?

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  3. When it comes to the poems you write, there’s something about them that sounds so smooth to the ear. A lot of the time, I find it hard to feel someone’s love for poetry even though I understand the mechanics of it. (How I worded that says it all.) I get it when I read yours though.

    Hopefully that’s for the best, as in (… seems incredibly random but) I’d be devastated if you became super evil and kept shooting words at me like that.

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    • I’m touched. This is one of the best compliments I’ve received on my blog poetry. I’m not super into rhyme, and I’ll never be a slam poet or the kind of poet who really writes poetry to be heard, but I do try to make the words flow in a smooth way, and I’m so glad to get this feedback that this is working.

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